by Nawa Nov 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I have words for all the confusion that I am feeling |
I have countless words for you withered soul, |
by SADADDY
This is a wonderful piece of work you have written here. The hurt and pain can be felt in the words you have expressed. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy. |
by Brittany C
I like this poem but I found the repetition to be a bit much. Other than that the rest of the wording was great. The flow was also good. I gave this poem a 5/5. |