I like this poem but I found the repetition to be a bit much. Other than that the rest of the wording was great. The flow was also good. I gave this poem a 5/5.

This is a wonderful piece of work you have written here. The hurt and pain can be felt in the words you have expressed. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy.

Sadaddy

I have countless words for you withered soul,
your*

Stick some periods in there too. :]

This was really really really good. I loved the style of it. You did a terriffic job. This has to be one of my favorite nonrhyming poems I've read in a long time. Five out of five for sure.