Flaming star (Tanka)

Again, you have packed so much beauty into so few words. I like this poem. Well penned Ingrid.

Sometimes we need to write big size poems to describe a certain issue and sometimes only a few words are enough to convey deep thought. You have cleverly chosen the second way. Subtle words, deeper meaning. Absoluety amazing poem..

I am always amazed at the short forms. You use so few words to say so much. An excellent write as usual from you. Good work. 5/5.

That sure is one beautiful poem Ingrid , i can just imagine a commet or meteor guiding me to a safer place, in my mind or in my life.
Well done

Grant