That sure is one beautiful poem Ingrid , i can just imagine a commet or meteor guiding me to a safer place, in my mind or in my life.
Well done

Grant

I am always amazed at the short forms. You use so few words to say so much. An excellent write as usual from you. Good work. 5/5.

Sometimes we need to write big size poems to describe a certain issue and sometimes only a few words are enough to convey deep thought. You have cleverly chosen the second way. Subtle words, deeper meaning. Absoluety amazing poem..

Again, you have packed so much beauty into so few words. I like this poem. Well penned Ingrid.