Comments : Libran's man

  • 15 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Nice poem is not I should say because it is way better than nice. What you mean to convey through this poem is absolutely understandable. I flow the flow and rhythm of the poem. A gr8 poem overall.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Aww this is brilliant. it really is. a great love poem, kept me hooked till the very last line.
    good flow and rhyme. keep up the great work.
    sorry im not saying much, your poem left me a little speechless.

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    "You know how to tease, excite and pleased"
    ^"please" not "pleased

    "You like maintaining balance in everything,
    We seems so much alike"
    ^Using the word "like" here twice kinda threw off the flow for me. You could say "were are quite similiar" or something to that extent.

    "I were captivates once by your smile"
    ^I think you mean "captivated" Beautiful description.

    "The dimple on your cheek,
    Make you so unique,
    Looking at you my knees get weak"
    ^This was so cute! Very nice scene you created.

    I felt like I know this person because you described them so nicely and I could tell they truly mean a lot to you. The flow here was mostly flawless with a nice rhyme scheme. The emotions expressed felt genuine and from the heart.

    Well done.
    *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    I liked your use of imadgry in your poem. I could get a clear meaning of what you ment when I read this. Also your rhyme schem never wavers through out the poem. I like how you have written about love but not made it too mushy.

    Well Written
    Sorry for the wait
    Darkcrystalbtrfy

  • 15 years ago

    by PlasticSmile

    Great imagery, and beautifully written. you have talent, keep writing. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    Lots = a lot
    - Yes, lots sounds a bit better. But, it's too much for the line. Too blunt and too off the wall for it.

    Good punctuation, something I'd yet to see in your poetry. Other than the 'lots' you have a decent poem here. I think that "YOU" is used way too much, but it also gives the poem a bit of oomph and originality - which is always good. So, it's not really a bad thing. Just kind of odd. But, I do like that in poems.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicole the Fairy

    Naww. such a sweet poem.
    I really like the way you make the readers' feel what you are trying to portray, and I think you have done this quite successfully. =)
    Loved the choice of words, and it flowed so well. =)
    Well done, definately a 5/5
    Keep it up =)
    xox

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This romantis love poem deliver the feelings of being in love so well

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite Write, Lovely, Enjoyed!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Agian, you write such strong emotion. I really enjoy reading your work. A wonderful love poem. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    I ADORE IT!!!