by Bhavin
Nice poem is not I should say because it is way better than nice. What you mean to convey through this poem is absolutely understandable. I flow the flow and rhythm of the poem. A gr8 poem overall. |
by Cara
Aww this is brilliant. it really is. a great love poem, kept me hooked till the very last line. |
by Blissful
"You know how to tease, excite and pleased" |
I liked your use of imadgry in your poem. I could get a clear meaning of what you ment when I read this. Also your rhyme schem never wavers through out the poem. I like how you have written about love but not made it too mushy. |
by PlasticSmile
Great imagery, and beautifully written. you have talent, keep writing. :) |
by Teria
Lots = a lot |
Naww. such a sweet poem. |
This romantis love poem deliver the feelings of being in love so well |
Exquisite Write, Lovely, Enjoyed!!! |
by Cella Bella
Agian, you write such strong emotion. I really enjoy reading your work. A wonderful love poem. 5/5 |
I ADORE IT!!! |