Life is like that
Pink flower he gave me
Before he went away
Told me that he loved me
And said
You are the only one I see each day
But the flower
Wilted
And so did
The Love
~Amazing part, really brings emotion.
Also i like the sailor's warning, I don't know if everyone gets that though.
~Barbed wire cutting through your dreams! Perfect!
Very well done. Bravo.