Great poem, it was realy well written and was relatable to me while I read it. I think maybe if you added a few spaces it might be easier to read, but it's excellent as is. Wonderful job and keep up the great job. 5/5

Haunt my waking moments every day
Haunt every moment of every day ... Does that maybe sound better to you ?

Blindness captures the soul
Blindness is what captures my soul ?

Sobs silently echo in your mind
Sobs a silent echo in your mind?

All of those are suggestions to perhaps help out the flow . The rest of the poem is so emotional , and I really do love it . The two last lines are my favorites . 5/5

Oh wow great poem. REALLY great.
keep writing.

"Of misery in all its delights
Sobs silently echo in your mind
Eyes to damaged to even cry"

Wonderfull use of wordplay and there is a universiality in the message that lends itself well to connection with the reader. Well done.