Suicide

This poem has a very special structure. It is written in short lines, like the cut thoughts on a suicidal mind. The structure emphasizes how suicides are choices made by a matter of seconds. The rhyming and flow were very good here as well, another 5/5

In a word... SWIFT. oh, ya, and beautifully put. 5/5!

It was a fast read. The flow was good. The wording was easy to understand. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

Very nice, i love how you kept the sentance structure short. the rhyme schme was amazing as well. Once again I can so easely relate to this poem.

My favorite lines were:
Silent screams
Secret obsession
Worthless soul
Full of depression

Well Written
Darkcrystalbtrfy

I loved the short stanzas, makes it feel as though it is happening, and happening fast, which is well suited for this poem. Nice write, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe