Nobodies hero (Senryu)

You are still Mistress of the short poems Ingrid!
Every word in this poem is beautiful, but you will not walk alone, as you are my hero.

Well I had to read this poem as it's my name on here, its very good its so short yet to the point. Its a sad read but although you may not realize it you are somebodys hero just for bein there =]

Ingrid,

a sad truth, aptly expressed. I imagine with this a ex-war veteran, no longer respected, his peers no longer alive, so alone he lives with his memories, his nightmares, all alone waiting only for death, a death to take him to all the death that he has witnessed in his long life.

I may have grasped at this all wrong, but this is what it gave me.

Take care

Michael
((hugs))

It was short, a little sad and to the point. The wording was great. I gave this poem a 5/5.