Very interesting and unique take! i loved it : ) 5/5

You and your words seem to flow very well in this piece of work. Enjoyable read thank you for sharing. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

Sadaddy

Wow Corrine, very nice write you have here, I am glad I happened upon it, I love your word choice and description, everything flowed beautifully and made me ponder my own relationship with writing. An excellent read, nice work!

A very imaginative use of language. Highly creative and also thought provoking at the same time.