Really good poem, and if it is for a contest good luck with that. 5/5

To be honest, I liked this subject of dancing in the rain. I really liked the concept. Its infact motivating and a confidence booster kind of poem where a reader is told not to give up.

Nice write and Nice read.

Regards,
Bhavin

Wow Kel i really enjoyed it...ur poem may look short but the content is filled with lots of messages and i like how you end the poem
5/5 from me and all the best for the contest;)

Raw and true emotion. I loved this poem. Goodluck with the contest :)

First off , there is much to much repetition of words . You need to be various with your vocabulary , or it takes away the beauty of your writing . And i'm not too sure if you were trying to rhyme your first stanza , but you really need to revise it if you were , because the rhymes are of very poor quality , and it's also odd to only have the beginning of a poem rhyme . 4/5

I also have the feeling I never read a poem of yours before... so much i've been missing... :)
This poem has a quite deep message... Sometimes you need to stand up for yourself ... because you choose your own destiny through your actions...
I really liked this line:
"Life can be a struggle, as it can be a gift"
It is absolutely true...

*awesome work*
5/5
isabel

A few places are broken off at the wrong spot in the line. punctuation is off, if you take what I gave you in your most latest poem and apply it here, it's a VERY easy fix. Not nearly as bad. There are a few commas that aren't needed though.

depends = depend.

This poem is beautifully written. This masterpiece reflects a theme of my favorite poet, moving in passion resting in reason

What a great message this piece holds, along with much truth. The rhyme and rhythm aren't the smoothest, but sometimes that doesn't matter. I try not to focus so much on the technical part of poetry when reading others work. Especially when they seem to come from the heart, as this did. 5/5 from me.

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