A very emotionally descriptive piece, you carried the flow very well =] The meaning of the poem was thought out very well and you worded it beautifully. The ending of the poem was also a very good way of concluding the meaning of the piece, really good job!

Wow i loved that poem, i loved how u started about how u are scared to show ur self and then ending to do not be afraid im right..right?? 10/10:)shisana