Comments : Sick

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Short but speaks volumes. Two meanings for me, "Hunger unanswered", for food or something missing in life. Both could cause torture, pain and restless nights. Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Good, strong poem..sometimes words are stronger when you used only a few of them!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by AngelicDecadence

    It was very short.. reminded me of hunger.. or insomnia..
    Though it was short it was good, well done. Bravo.
    *Chaotic Angel*