Comments : Morning Repetition

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow, that was so beautiful and romantic. You described the feeling of shyness so well. Every word was so sweet and full of meaning.

    She watches me as I (look) away
    leaving us with nothing much to say
    sitting from a distant view
    there is nothing much that we (can) do

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    There is only one way to live life and that is to go out there and make it happen.
    Dare to take chances and reach out..if you fail then at least you have tried!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Mm.. being shy can indeed keep us from reaching our goals.. whether the goal is to get a girl/guy or other things..
    sometimes we just have to take a chance in life.. :)
    nice poem.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Well i know what it is to be shy. I used to find quit shy guys romantic. All i can say there are ways to overcome shyness so that should never be an obstacle to get close to one you love. also when both are shy, when not use words to approach each other( a romantic letter) that means so much. I enjoy your write, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awwww! This is reallly cute, if you love soemone, tell them. You never know what will happen, Yet again, another wonderful piece of work.! 5/5