Is this the friend you told me about a while back, not that far back....
This is deep, and filled with your fear of havin' her search for PERFECT lead to a tragic end for you...
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Has pushed away the world she knows
trapped inside this horror show
all the mirrors she looks into
all show someone she doesn't know

that right there jus told how i am this whole poem was really me so good keep it up 5/5

Great job.
This is the story of my life. Perfectionist to the core, wont take anyone's help.
Keep up the good work.

Really nice to see you care somuch about your friends! Really great to see some compassion in this day and age.

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Very well written!! This poem reminds me about myself a couple of years ago.. I know how hard it is when you are stuck in that pattern but I hope that your friend will be another me and realize that there is much more to her life than perfection and that maybe she is satisfied with being unperfect!

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