I miss that feeling

by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost   Nov 26, 2008


Visions of you
Keep flooding through my brain
The memory of your kiss
Is driving me insane

When the wind blows
I hear it whisper in my ear
"I miss you my love
How I wish you were here"

It feels like an eternity
But it's only been a day
It's amazing. 24 hours,
And I'm already starting to sway

I know you'll be back but your departure
Has sent my mind reeling
I miss how it felt; to be loved
God how I miss that feeling

Inspired By and Dedicated To: Christina

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Aww. This was great. The rhyme really helped the flow, it was amazing.
    it was simple, which is how i like poetry.
    it was sad, because you told of missing someone, but it was inspirational because you also told of a love that was worth missing.
    Beautiful..
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Love is a feeling that cannot be forgotten or erased. I liked the flow and smoothness of this write..good one!

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    The flow and wording was great, I saw nothing wrong in this poem. I gave it a 5/5. It was sad and sweet at the same time =)