Questions

Maybe, who's to say, that it wasn't just coincidence,
That we met that night under all those stars,
Perhaps we were never meant to be,
Maybe you weren't supposed to mend my scars.

^^^ Loved that part the most!! So powerful and easy to relate to! Loved this write, it was one of your best i think (in my opinion). Its so....good. Your poems are filled with so much emotion and they always flow so well with the perfect choice of words. Nice work (again) 5/5

I only saw one thing that you might fix
"You blew away, right one cue."
instead of "one" I think you ment "on"
Other then that everything else was great. I think that everyone could relate to this poem at some point. I gave it a 5/5.

Does everything happen for a reason..?
Do wishes really come true?
Could one person change another's life?
Can you save every person who comes to you?
^^ i love how you start it off with questions so many people will be able to relate to very very good tactic!

Maybe, who's to say, that it wasn't just coincidence,
That we met that night under all those stars,
Perhaps we were never meant to be,
Maybe you weren't supposed to mend my scars.
^^aw why? why wouldn't they be meant to mend your scars? ((this helps the reader get into the poem by having questions arise of their own great job!))

I wished, more then anything, just to be near you,
I know, I shouldn't complain, after all, I got my wish,
It came true. I got you. But.. maybe it wasn't suppose
To come true. Could there be another fish..?
^^ aught oh....why are you second guessing? good that you got your wish though!!!

You were my everything, the thing that I always miss,
You changed who I was, or who I thought I was,
But who's to say this wasn't me? Who's to say,
That this isn't just what love does?
^^ very true i dont think anyone could really really say

You protected me and help all those around,
You saved me, but I couldn't save you,
Just when I thought we would be "me and you,"
You blew away, right one cue.
^^ ah i loved that last line!! it was so intriguing and cleverly worded

great job! loved the wording and things brought to attention! 5/5

Hmm this was a bit confusing. I'm not sure what the poem was about. What I got from it was you got together with the guy you wanted but are not sure if he was the one and in the end he left you? I dont know, I could be wrong.

"It came true. I got you. But.. maybe it wasn't suppose "
^"supposed"

"You protected me and help all those around"
^"helped"

You used the word "maybe" her A LOT and sometimes repitition is very effective in getting the meaning across but other times it just messes with the flow. It could have been your intention to use "maybe" in some many places to get across the confusion you felt but even then I think it was too much.

Well done.

I like u ask the question and i a way u answer it urslef. i can so relate to this. very sad and beautiful. the words u choice were great. the flow was nice. reminds me things that happen to me and mi ex... so ya.. i really like it. awesome job. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy