Wow. Thats so good.
Great job keep up the good work!

Smooth and nice. I enjoyed the read.
Keep it up Kevin

But there was a time when I thought
I had the keys to all the doors
Then I ended up on the ground
Crawling on all fours

Is my fav part very very good, sometimes we do think we have the answers or can get through it alone but end up makeing it worse and i feel thats what you said here. 5/5

Oh wow. Amazing poem. I absolutely ADORE it! The rhyming is not forced at all, the story line is amazing. For such a short poem the story just envelopes you and makes you come up with pictures and stories of your own. Great job. 5/5