Thirteen Hours Awake

by StandStill   Nov 27, 2008


Chalky vitamin taste
with a crayon in my hand.
Drawing doodles down my sleeve,
cherry red, isn't it grand?

I fear I'm but a bit obsessed,
monsters filling to the brim.
I used to feel that life was whole,
tonight it's no more than skim.

7:12 in the morning,
7:12 at night.
I've been awake for far too long
and my eyes are hurting from the light.

Silence, it's sort of nauseating,
it just bothers me to know
that you think that I don't care...
The poem's dead, I suppose.

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  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    I felt like this poem is needing something prehaps another stanza? but your last line
    "The poem's dead, I suppose." Is your ending, and it gives an abbrupt end which I can see the reason for in your 3rd stanza.
    other than that really neat poem!

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