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by Twisted Heart
Just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this write. The rhythm was really tight and flowed well until this passage: "Rant and rave, please do leave I'm sure you'll need some time to grieve I myself do believe I need some room to grow" The third line seemed to falter just a bit with the missing syllable. Perhaps if you worded it like this: I, myself, I do believe Just a suggestion. I did love the whole poem, though. Very thought provoking. On second thought, if I slow down the words and pause, it works out just as well. Still crazy, Jeannie
by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit
Rolling between chuckling and identifying, I thoroughly enjoyed this little ditty...music would, indeed, be fitting here...a hit I predict...'-)