Comments : Enduring Love (Triolet)

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes love will endure and that you have penned with a sentimental touch..a lovely Triolet. Take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautiful write. Triolet was probably your best bet as to what form you should of put this in, so great choice right there. Beautifully written, left me speechless. This is a masterpiece. Well done. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful format and a beautiful poem, Silvia!
    I enjoyed reading it very much, this format is very suitable for love poems!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A nice job with the exception of this line:

    Roses die, the scent of flowers faded.
    The line does not adhere to the rhyme scheme. Other than that, I thought it was beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. Everything about it was great. I liked the format that you used. i gave this poem a 5/5.