Wedding bells ( String Senryu)

by Ingrid   Nov 27, 2008


A clear cloudless day,
African sun beating down
Lovers hearts take flight

Two sweet turtle doves,
making vows in front of God
Forever as one

Precious fragile frames
Delicate souls so in love
Angels chant their names

Dedicated to my dear friends LJ Roodt and Cherisa Kruger, who will become husband and wife in 2009.

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  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a well penned, romantic poem Ingrid, describing the day two hearts are enwined as one.
    As usual with your work, your words are full of great imagery and description, creating a piece so beautiful to read. Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A clear cloudless day,
    African sun beating down
    Lovers hearts take flight

    I like the way how you draw the reader into
    your world. The whole picture can be seen with the African sun that potrays the atmosphere of this day...liked it!