Give em Hell

by DarkCrystalbtrfy   Nov 27, 2008


So if a picture is worth a thousand words
Then the fight for freedom should be widly heard
To take a life in your hands
To be under your soul command
To rise up and take control
Of liberty and courage
That stands tall,
Never lose your nerve when battle calls
Voices from the past speak out
They say take your wings and let them fly
For the american people to the sky
Echos of previous wars cry out
They say give em hell,
Dont back down
Rage against those who hate
Dont let those lives be taken in vain
The battle horn calls again
Once twice from deep withen
Rally your strength
Feel it in your bones
Above all courage stands alone

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  • 15 years ago

    by PlasticSmile

    I think better punctuation would make this poem even better than it already is. But all in all this is an amazing poem, with a true message. good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    To be under your soul command
    To be under you own soul's command ?

    Of liberty and courage
    That stands tall,
    Merge these lines , it betters the flow .

    Good job once again on this one , but I found it hard to get into . I had alot of trouble with the flow I think .. It could be better . 4/5

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