To be under your soul command
To be under you own soul's command ?

Of liberty and courage
That stands tall,
Merge these lines , it betters the flow .

Good job once again on this one , but I found it hard to get into . I had alot of trouble with the flow I think .. It could be better . 4/5

I think better punctuation would make this poem even better than it already is. But all in all this is an amazing poem, with a true message. good job.