When somone is lonley , and no one to talk or wishper to , it si very hard , to imagine the feling of falling inside your soul , and deeply scream with no one to hear those screams!!!

great job

i would say it si a very nice pice but i hope you cut it into stanzas it si better then 1 block of words !!
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great great one 5/5

Mmmm I'll think I'll doo that! Thanks! I had to write it down cuz it was in my head since 6:30am this morning!