Can I Enter Your Heart?

by X Harlea X   Nov 27, 2008


We haven't really known each other long
But the day without talking to you just drags on and on.
I wish i could have a chance with you
And i wish you that you want the same thing too.

I have had fun the last few days
Talking to you have made me feel special; like i could make it through.
Nothing has made me happier
Then when you come on and make me want you even more.

Just talking to you puts a smile on my face
So many times i have thought i lost my fate.
Hurt by so many guys; my heart was torn apart
But slowly you are putting it back together.

One question that has been runnin through my mind
Over and over again I question my self about who i wish i was mine.
I must ask your this; hopefully it will enlighten a spark
Can I enter your heart?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I thought it was very sweet. And well expressed. Flow was good; as was rhyme scheme. Nicely done. 5/5

  • Welll its simply expressed:)
    u know da thing that makes u hold on is having this goofy and beautiful smile in each and everytime he is around
    keep it up
    i really liked it:)
    5/5

    lili