by Hollymariee Nov 28, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I close my eyes |
by Rocky
I like how you didnt limit this poem to four line stanzas and a simple rhyme scheme. i just find poems like that too generic and boring. it was quite a good poem with some good imagery and emotions in it |
by i love you
Wow this is absolutely amazing! i love it and know exactly how you feel! you really know how to use words..don't ever quit! :) |
by i love you
Wow this is absolutely amazing! i love it and know exactly how you feel! you really know how to use words..don't ever quit! :) |
by Marc Ortiz
Well I like the other poem better but this one is also great. |
by Lady Nik
Wow. I think this one was my favorite. I loved everything about this one. The imagery is amazing. I love the style as well. This one really covers alot about relationships..with real original emotions. You should write more like this. This one is one of your best..no doubt. Shanik |