Proud you"just got out your feelings" thats what the best poetry is about.
You did beautiful flow despite it quickly written, impressive and pleased.
Stay strong. 5/5

Miserably delicious...how's that?

the note at the bottom i felt was absolutely unnecessary, the poem was powerful and far beyond touching...i didn't read it as a vent of getting your feelings out, i read it in a light of of different sort, of passion, longing and reminisince(sp)...that i found to be a most compelling read...awesome!
john