Comments : Poor Man's Process

  • 16 years ago

    by Scum Queen

    I usually hate this, but this one is thankfully non-generic and isn't cliche ridden. I still resisted my hopeless romanticism enough to give it a four instead of a five.
    Nice work, I don't like much poetry(just as I often ignore lyrics) and in both fields love is usually a quick and easy pile of cliche's if you want to write something but have no inspiration. Clearly not with you, considering that you have just about no love poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    It's got all those cliche ingredients, but you manage to structure the poem in a way that makes it not feel like a cliche. I'll admit, it's not your best, but I like it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    I love it.
    One of the better love poems out there. It speaks the truth for a lover.