Pure Conception

Maybe it's just me who's no understanding the beauty of these pieces, but this piece just didn't mean anything to me. Yes, the rhymes were good, and the stanzas were well constructed, but the context doesn't to have any real purpose.

Brad

I liked it
i am a little surprised that i did
because im not very relgious
but very well writen
it talks to people

It's a creative and intelligent write. There's a nice touch in it. Thoroughly enjoyable and truly a very good poetry!

Amazing. The simplicity - yet the weight. amazing.

I like this poem, I've not came across lots of religious poems, but this one is short yet so much has being said. I like the way you'd started it and the message it convey. Keep it up, kel.