I dont see anything wrong with this, I loved how you started the poem out with another language that I didn't know of, I thought that was a unique twist.

Well done.
5/5.

Wow this one was short but it shocked me how much was said. it was a little different but it fit very well with your collection.
i enjoyed your intro

Anno Domini Nostri Iesu Christi
"In the Year of Our Lord Jesus Christ".
Many tongues have sung to thee
The praises of Our Lord to be sacrificed

it really pulled me in
great job 5/5

laura

I liked it. Which is odd.. because i don't usually enjoy religious poems. well, as has been said above, the intro was the best, i liked it, i especially enjoyed the "Many tongues have sung to thee" it implies the above lines. I liked that. Well, good job, not much to say because i couldn't find anything wrong with it. Nice.
*Chaotic Angel*

I liked this poem. It showed your strong belief. The wording was great and so was the flow. I saw nothing wrong with anything in this poem. 5/5

I like this poem, I've not came across lots of religious poems, but this one is short yet so much has being said. I like the way you'd started it and the message it convey. Keep it up, kel.

Amazing. The simplicity - yet the weight. amazing.

It's a creative and intelligent write. There's a nice touch in it. Thoroughly enjoyable and truly a very good poetry!

I liked it
i am a little surprised that i did
because im not very relgious
but very well writen
it talks to people

Maybe it's just me who's no understanding the beauty of these pieces, but this piece just didn't mean anything to me. Yes, the rhymes were good, and the stanzas were well constructed, but the context doesn't to have any real purpose.

Brad