by Hollymariee
I really like the rhymes and the idea is fantastic . Your flow is almost flawless . I'm going to take this warning to heart . 5/5 , great job . |
by H E Losey
Thankl you for your time in reading my words and for leaving those words of your own. |
by Cyber Saiyan
First off, I really like the title. It foreshadows the meaning of the poem and peaked my interest. |
by Sourav
I think it's a very enjoyable and well written poem. Well measured lines and good flow. Well done! |
by Spirit
I liked the different animal that you pick to represent love, or at least false love. It was refreshing not to see a snake or rat used but a chameleon. I would of, however liked to have seem them as darker critters to be weary of. But you were able to that started out dark and was turned around. So koodoos to you. |