Perfect Family ( synchronicity)

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Nov 29, 2008


Crystal Vase on an oak table
Vibrant colors brighten the room
Flowers

Purples and pinks a splash of white
Accented with dark and light green
Color

Sun shinning creates a rainbow
Reflecting through the vase prisms
Rainbows

Wind blowing the curtains inward
Essence of flowers fill the room
Fragrance

Laughter of children on the breeze
Contagious when it hits your ear
Smiles

A Puppy sleeping peacefully
Soft warm bundle needing our love
cuddle

A happy family portrait scene?
Hidden flaws or perfection gleam?
wonder

Reality wished in a dream.
Or a movie on the TV?
You guess
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Syllable count 8-8-2
8- three line stanzas un-rhymed

last two lines written with a twist

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  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    For some reason this left me feeling rather sad i'm afraid, it was very well written and you paint a real pretty mental picture Crystal, but the ending left me sad
    Well written

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    For some reason this left me feeling rather sad i'm afraid, it was very well written and you paint a real pretty mental picture Crystal, but the ending left me sad
    Well written

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This form is on my list to try and you have made it look so easy. Very well written and now I shall be all day trying to figure out the answer.

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