Tempting

Well to be honest I'm not at all for love poems but again I like your vocabulary. I honestly don't know what to exactly say but you have very good poems. NEVER stop writing, no matter what anyone does or what happens. Keep writing =]

5/5

Wonder if you see me
Ponder if you care
See your eyes, they flicker
With the fire you ensnare
^^ very very good imagery intriguing way to start things off!!

It dances from your finger
Flows through glowing hair
Wonder if it burns you
You seem so unaware
^^ observing around you nice ! love the wording!

Your heart is so elusive
Your soul, so old and warm
I'm the flower, you're the season
With you, I transform
^^ becoming one type of action lovely!

Sitting in a corner
My air to draw your fire
A prayer that you will come to me
To quench your own desire
^^ ahh its his desire not yours interesting!

5/5 !! great description