A well written piece, strong, confronting, thought provoking and a topic I can relate to , for me you achieved your goal , I thought you conveyed your feelings on this topic succinctly..

"You've walked into the sun before And suckled its despair" I loved this, what great imagery.

A couple of the stanza's didn't flow as well as they might. Still the best poem I've read in some time.

Nicko