In a world so unkind (contest)

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Nov 29, 2008


Tenderness is hard to find
In a world so unkind
Kill your brother
Cheat a friend
On and on it never ends

When emotions of the sweetest kind
Enter life don't be blind
Open your door
Let love in
Let it flow let it begin

Don't hesitate, don't play the fool
It's a new day; a new rule
Sun is out
Flowers awake
Happiness we can make

See my smile; eyes that shine?
In this world so unkind
Hope lives
Friendship blooms
In happiness I am consumed

*format hehe my own* Enjoy

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  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is touching xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well Crystal thats a beautifull poem, a nice possitive one the kind i like best.
    A person needs to see the value of your own happiness in life, i'm glad that i'm not the only one who writes about it,when its found its a magical discovery.
    Well done

    Grant