You were...then not...

It was very touching

You were my rock
To you I could always talk
And with you I wished to always walk
Down this endless road called life
^^ Sweetie , since the rest of your poem doesn't rhyme , you should really change up the structure of these sentences . It's just really oddly put into words .

You were my hero
To you I could always admire
^^ This don't make sense , try something like "When it came to you , I could always admire . "
And with you I wished to learn
About this place called Earth

You were my role model
To you I could always run too
And with you I wished to destroy
All these depressing memories

You were not there that day
Without you I could never accept
And without you I could never expect
To do anymore than fake a smile

This is really sad . I think you did a really good job , but there is some improving to do . 5/5

Perfect word choice. The feelings came from the words to my mind and they keep spinning in there. Very memorable. Great job. 5/5