A vicious circle

by MyNewMoon   Nov 30, 2008


He loves her
Like I love him
This vicious circle continues
Hearts tossed around on a whim
Living beings destroyed
By loves vicious grasp.
A killer in disguise
Exerting its deadly wrath

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  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Great job!! i really like it! its so moving and has so much feeling!!

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    I like this poem very, very much!
    PM me please. You seem like a cool person to talk to.

  • 16 years ago

    by jescelle

    Nice usage of words. the complexity in your structure (especially in such a short poem), and the simple topic combined together make the emotion of breaking up and moving on pop right out. great job babes! 5/5!
    Belle

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