by MyNewMoon Nov 30, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He loves her |
Great job!! i really like it! its so moving and has so much feeling!! |
by xx
I like this poem very, very much! |
by jescelle
Nice usage of words. the complexity in your structure (especially in such a short poem), and the simple topic combined together make the emotion of breaking up and moving on pop right out. great job babes! 5/5! |