I guess the best of this poem is when you said a thin line betwen pleaseure and pain
and it is indeed my friend , sure is !! a lot of wizdom ad experience here !

great one i could not put the words more good my self !!

5/5

Wonderful poem, very expressive and the emotions were so clear to feel in this piece. A absolutely lovely piece that is so well-written. Keep writing, always and forever, take care...

Something different and the form looks
interesting too. You did well with this. I like
the mixed feeling this poem gives..good one!
Take care.

Very different. A unusual and unique form of poetry. Nicely written. Very sensitive indeed.