Wow i must say that you have beautifully crafted this wonderful masterpiece...It was such a delightful to read.

Excellent Job
5/5

I like the way you wrote this, yes love, oh love, love makes the world go round, love works in ways thats are wonderous and strange, it brightens ones smiles through the coldest of time. I think you killed it with this poem. You started it very strongly, sentences flowed well and the rhymes fitted but towards the end the energy sort of subsided. Great work.