You Don't Love Me No More

by Shantel   Nov 30, 2008


It was a beautiful creation,
The most glorious scene.
An "unbreakable relationship"
They said about you and me.

You said we'll always be together
And I said I love you so;
But now I'm starting to think
You don't love me no more.

We walked the halls together,
While everyone stared in awe.
We were such the perfect couple
But no one could see our flaws.

Even though people always talked
I never let you go.
But maybe I just will
If you don't love me no more.

I never should have trusted you
And you know the reason why.
I wasn't your only girl
But you were my only guy.

I always had my doubts
And that's why I'm letting you go.
The reason I'm saying goodbye
Is cause you don't love me no more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    This took my breath away!! greaat joob. i love the selection of words and mostly in this part:
    It was a beautiful creation,
    The most glorious scene.
    An "unbreakable relationship"
    They said about you and me.

    the rhyming is pretty well done, and the only flaw which wasnt really a big deal cause the poem was really good was the flow in some parts. the lines could be more of equal lenght. sounds better when u read it. otherwise, nicely done! keep up the good work.
    take care

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