This took my breath away!! greaat joob. i love the selection of words and mostly in this part:
It was a beautiful creation,
The most glorious scene.
An "unbreakable relationship"
They said about you and me.

the rhyming is pretty well done, and the only flaw which wasnt really a big deal cause the poem was really good was the flow in some parts. the lines could be more of equal lenght. sounds better when u read it. otherwise, nicely done! keep up the good work.
take care