Crushed Back Underground

by Baby Rainbow   Nov 30, 2008


Here i am once again
feeling all this pain
no one here with me
no one here to see
tears keep falling down
maybe i will slowly drown
voices echoing in my head
telling me they want me dead
good days start to come at last
i begin to forget the past
but all the hope that i just found
has all been crushed back underground
maybe I'm just not meant to live
I'm running out of strength to give
i cant keep pretending that I'm alright
then break down and crumble at night
but all these words that i just said
is only a poem that might be read
and if these words are never seen
no one will know this pain has been

Saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    You have emotionally expressed very well in this poem.
    -tears keep falling down
    maybe i will slowly drown

    -voices echoing in my head
    telling me they want me dead

    -but all the hope that i just found
    has all been crushed back underground

    ^
    Just a few that I liked..well done again!

    Take care

    Michael x

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Aww this is so sad. Its so powerful and moving. Im sorry you feel this way too. Always here for you hun. 5/5 xx

  • 15 years ago

    by NeverBelieve

    Babe, love the poem, but i know your hurting and ill always be here for you no matter what remember that darling i love you lots xxxx