Don't give up on us

by zariieee   Dec 1, 2008


If only you could look into my eyes,
If only you could really see.
How much I want this,
How much I want us to be.

and now i feel as if my life is crashing,
My heart is shattered into tiny pieces,
Splintering every part of my body.
The blood runs and my body feels cold,
The tears they fall and can't pause.

My life and my dreams,
They mean nothing to me.
We fought this battle for too long,
To just give up now.

I'm keeping my head up high,
But you're lowering your face.
Please don't give up now..
I have too much faith.

I love you,
Believe in me..
Believe in us,
Believe that we can make it through.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I can really feel the fighting spirit inside you of not wanting to give up something that you have worked so hard to build.

    but you might want to re-work on the long sentences in the 3rd stanza, besides that i think you've done a nice job

    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow. i can only imagine the hurt that you are going through, when you are ready to keep fighting for it to work, and the other person is ready to give up.
    you should show them this.. its great.
    nice flow.
    Awesome work.. :)

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