Wow. i can only imagine the hurt that you are going through, when you are ready to keep fighting for it to work, and the other person is ready to give up.
you should show them this.. its great.
nice flow.
Awesome work.. :)

I can really feel the fighting spirit inside you of not wanting to give up something that you have worked so hard to build.

but you might want to re-work on the long sentences in the 3rd stanza, besides that i think you've done a nice job

5/5 from me