Jeeeeeeeeze, you are a true writer.
You are so talented, and i mean that sincerely. (im not one to lie) who knew? that someone could write liek you. I reaaallllly liked this poem, keep it up!

This poem reminded me of something someone said to me a couple years ago. After I broke up with him. I loved it anyway though. Flow was wonderfull, as was emotion. Nicely done. 5/5