Wow. This was so sad, i was not expecting it to end like that.
I love how you tell of them pulling each other through the toughest parts.. and how they could only make it the shore together. fantastic - this is what i call true love.
i also love the concept of the war.. the whole world against the pair. Very original.
The end, how they died together and will float around the ocean together, was very sweet.

Awesome poem.
keep up the great work.

Well I do agree with Cara that the concept was very original.Truely indeed the poem was great having to infuse love with nature; describing your struggled love

but i think certain things that took the poem off was the long sentences in the 2nd and 5th stanza and also the flow a little bit off in some parts of the poem. I think it could have been done better with a little work.Well that what i think... but overall i really like the idea of the poem;)