I can totally relate to your poem. I take pills like that too. Very well written poem. Check out mine as well and tell me what you think. THANKS!!

I wosnt trying to make any1 else commit suicide, i dont know where u got that from? I was trying to write sumthing that happened to me, which other ppl could relate to, and know that they're not alone. And no i dont want to die.

iv just thought, did u understand the bit where i said 'keep trying until u break the suicidal loop' as meaning that i wos encouraging people to die? Sorry I guess it was badly put, but i didnt mean that at all. I meant trying to break the loop, so that you get better, not die!!

wow this is powerful stuff i kno wat its like to want to die i had the same feeling once it sux! good job with the poem

thanks steph xxxx