I look at you with my silly grin
You have no clue of the love within
^^ Ha ha, I think she does Grant!

You are beautiful in every single way:)

Much love,

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful love poem and such a lucky woman. I am sure she knows how much you love her.

Wow.. this was so beautiful.
who you wrote this for is very lucky.
i loved your rhyme.. so sweet.
5/5

Hello Grant,

this is a very touching love poem. In it, it expresses how rich a love can be when it has endured the passage of time. It demonstrates how passion can still run as deep for a love that is true, for a lover who is a life mate. Two lovers who have become woven like the strands of time, becoming stronger and longer. An unbreakable tie.

Well done my friend on this amazing poem.

Michael

p.s One question, the punctuation in the first 2 stanzas stands out against the rest. Is this intended?

A very beautiful write. a lovely flow and so heartfelt. these are the kinds of poems i enjoy reading most. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Very beautiful love poem. Sometimes words just isn't enough to express the love we feel for our partners, but you said it all. I have great admiration for couples that has beeing together for such a long time. It's rare in these days, but what is pure is everlasting and that's real love. Keep it up, kel.

Aww Grant. This was so absolutely gorgeous! Your word choice was flawless and helped bring the poem together. The love for your wife was so clear in this poem.. this was such a strong write.. and the flow was very well done.. great rhyme.

This was beautiful.
Gorgeous.
5/5

Wow Grant, this poem is so inspirational. I love the use of the dove in the first few verses, it was really ingenious, and your play with words was fantastic. Throughout the whole thing your love for your wife was overflowing, as the reader I really felt it.

Amazing, 5/5