Omggg this is sooooooooo gud...!!! love it !

Wow. what an amazing... just wow. 5/5. great job. ~KM~

3rd stanza it says mysef i think u mean myself

other thn tht its a good poem. keep up the good work

Well no doubt that you have lots of spelling error (which can be fixed with the help of this site's spell check) but what enthralls me about this poem is the context that you have presented. I can feel the raw emotions and your stuggles of moving on. Other than the spelling, Keep it up

Your emotions are displayed very well in this poem, the chioce of structure you have chosen is also well suited to the piece =]

I Like the way you let your emotions flow..good job 5/5

Beautiful, 5/5. Em

Sooo nice poem 5/5

The concept of this poem is miraculous.
I love the way that your emotions flowed in every stanza. It's sad but at the same time it show's how strong your love is for this person. Truly amazing!

Thats good. i love it.